Well, my first attempt at translation was released to the wild last night and so far the response looks pretty good. Of course, not everything is sunshine and roses but I’m pretty happy with the response (although more feedback is always welcome. It helps me improve ^_^ ).
As far as my thoughts on the first post, I was ultimately OK with it for the most part, but I know things can improve greatly. My grasp of the language has deteriorated quite a bit so there will be a lot of re-learning it seems, especially of grammar and usage rules. While I have expertise in English grammar, sadly my Japanese has never been that strong. I’m not happy I am relying somewhat on MTL for the first pass through, but it does help me to understand the sentence a bit more. As time passes and I can re-learn what I have forgotten (and pick up new things as well), and these translations will get better.
I hope you all will bear with me as I continue forward. Right now, I will be working on the second prologue chapter as I write my other stories. So while it may not be posted immediately, I can firmly say that I’ll post it in the coming weeks.
Thanks for reading!
P.S.: In between releases, please feel free to read some of my original works and tell me what you think. I would love your feedback there as well!